Essays and Criticism

‘Storming Heaven in a Book’:

A Poet of Compassion

Preface to David Kessel's Collected Poems, O the Windows of the Bookshop Must Be Broken,

Survivors' Press, 2006

To say it is as much a privilege to know Kessel the man as it is to know Kessel the poet is to deviate from the true task of a literary preface, but bearing in mind the essential humanity of Kessel’s work, I think it is germane to express this. Kessel’s personal qualities of humility and sincerity are all the more striking in light of the chronic paranoid schizophrenia from which he has suffered since his first breakdown at 17. He is now 57.

  On first meeting Kessel in 2004, I sensed palpable inner struggles when greeted by a shy, vulnerable man with large pained eyes, Jude the Obscure’s ‘Little Time’ grown up – gaze on the photo of Kessel as a boy on this cover and you will see depicted a harrowed-eyed version of Jude Fawley’s troubled son; a precocious sense of moral responsibility burdening his brow like that fictional twisted innocent. And responsibility is one thing Kessel the poet never shirks: he writes with naked honesty of the brutal truths on the psychological front line. There is a genuine analogue here: the trauma of schizophrenic breakdown expressed as a metaphorical shell shock, its symptoms the shrapnel from breakdown’s abstract battlefield.

  Indeed, in his spiderishly scribbled letters to me over the last year, Kessel has often quoted Wilfred Owen: ‘Poetry is a savage war’ – as well as Joseph Conrad, from Lord Jim: ‘In the destructive element immerse’. This too Kessel does, fearlessly. He takes much inspiration and spiritual strength from the sentiments of the soldier poets of both world wars: Charles Sorley, Drummond Allison, Sidney Keyes, and his personal favourite, the inimitably barbed Keith Douglas. On one of my visits to Kessel’s flat in Whitechapel, he showed me his treasured spine-cracked edition of Keith Douglas’s Complete Works (replete with brittle brown dust-jacket), intricately inscribed with cramped notes framing each poem; and as you will see, some of Kessel’s poems begin with Douglas quotes. Stylistically and expressively however, Kessel’s poetry has more in common with that of Ivor Gurney and, in particular, Isaac Rosenberg. Interestingly Kessel’s cultural background shares similarities with the latter: while Rosenberg was the son of a Russian-Jewish immigrant who settled in London’s East End, Kessel is the grandson of a Jewish tailor of German-Jewish ancestry (‘kessel’ is German for ‘kettle’) who emigrated from South Africa to North London. Kessel has also lived in the East End since he was 24.

  Kessel’s familial background is, in his own mind, indelibly etched in his psychological make-up: with a Jewish tailor grandfather on his father’s side and a Blackshirt poet grandfather on his mother’s, Kessel himself thinks it a truism that he has been more susceptible to schizophrenic symptoms than most. This poses an intriguing genetic theory on the illness, and Kessel is ever the self-analyst (see The Utopianism of the Schizophrenic on page 98). His parents too play crucial roles in both his psychology and his poetry. His father is the field-surgeon Lippy in ‘Arnhem’ (page 78), whose experiences of war obviously heightened

Kessel’s idiomatic identification with war and its poetics; and his mother, who converted from Catholicism to Communism during World War II, presumably had some influence on Kessel’s own politics (discussed later) and indeed his poetics – gifts she inherited from her oppositely political father – as evident in a piece of her verse printed on her son’s request at the back of this book. It is arguable that the fusing of a Blackshirt’s poetic impulses with the polarised social awareness of a Jewish immigrant has resulted in the leftwing polemical outpouring of the poet grandson.

  I first came across Kessel’s work when thumbing through the poetry collections for review when I started at Survivors’ Poetry: his hefty chapbook, The Ivy – Collected Poems 1970-1994, with its inside quotes from

Edith Södergran and Christopher Caudwell and absent contents page instantly intrigued me, as did the heartfelt Preface by the author

himself; and the empathic introduction by the late Arthur Clegg (reproduced on the back of this book) with its emphasis on David as a ‘poet of compassion’. After reading this generous selection of consistently powerful and emotionally challenging poems (which I reviewed in Poetry Express Issue 20), several words competed in trying to sum up his

intensely expressive style: ‘raw’, ‘ragged’, ‘visceral’, ‘spiritual’, ‘polemical’, ‘bitter’, ‘contused’, ‘bruising’, ‘inspiring’, ‘lyrical’, ‘imagistic’, ‘onanistic’, ‘political’, and so on. But perhaps the word which best summed up

Kessel’s work was that chosen by Clegg: ‘compassionate’. Whatever one thinks of this poetry, few can deny the almost tangible spirit of compassion – a disappointed and enraged one perhaps – seething through practically every poem. This is demonstrably a poet who cares deeply for people and for the ‘Broken city’ macrocosm in which he observes his fellow beings (or Londoners), as if peering into a bustling rock-pool from which he

himself is, for a multitude of reasons, separate yet attached; an anomic anemone. And a Cockney cockle: throughout his poems he alludes to an almost semi-mystical motif of the ‘Cockney’, apparently embodying his

aspiration for a true 20th/21st century, self-possessing working-class identity – a macro-Cockney. Consciously or unconsciously he perhaps also alludes to the label which fictionally broke the will of John Keats (who was more thick-skinned than posterity gives him credit for): a poet of the ‘Cockney School’ – the snobbish drubbing by John Wilson Croker in Blackwood’s magazine, April 1818.

  On first reading Kessel I was struck by the frequent ideological references littering his work. In the very first poem in The Ivy’s sequence, ‘Arnhem’ – a war-inspired piece strongly reminiscent of Siegfried Sassoon and Keith Douglas* – erupts the line ‘Down to fifty and like Lilburne won’t be beaten’, signifying a political significance in the choice of this 17th century Leveller* as a symbol of defiance. Clearly this was a poet whose sympathies lay on the Left. A few pages on, ‘To The International Brigade’ further cemented a – noticeably historic – leftist erudition. ‘Beautiful Ireland’ proffered the equally telling reference to Robert ‘Tressel’ ((sic): the single ‘l’ misspelling, an unconscious mirroring of ‘Kessel’?), author of the British Left’s favourite work of fiction, The Ragged Trousered Philanthropists, as a figure of ‘passionate commitment’. In ‘Songs of Soho’ Kessel openly expresses his ideological aspirations, albeit slightly obliquely: ‘Will I and my world-joining hope of Socialism be drowned in this lusting ocean?’ And the almost incantatory ‘For Zoe’ is littered with other telling tributes as Kessel – almost reminiscent of the late Ian Dury and his nostalgia-loaded pop lyrics (i.e. ‘Reasons to be Cheerful Part 3’) – lists the ‘things’ (human and inanimate) that inspire him: ‘Keir Hardie’s eyes’, ‘Robert

Tressel’s (sic) passion’. There is also, at the front of this collection, the beautiful quote from the granite-willed Nye Bevan along with one from British Marxist Christopher Caudwell and a reference to the Burford Levellers; into the collection, two poem-accompanying quotes from Edgell Rickword, veteran of the World War I Artists Rifles and Socialist poet, including his striking “That forward blasting vision love”; and a dedication to the late Michael Robinson, ‘London teacher, anti-racist and Communist’.

  A poet of the underdog, the outsider, the societally-labelled failure, under-achiever, or purely fate-thwarted, Kessel carries a torch for those unhappy numbers among whom he no doubt – and unfairly – counts himself; a willing martyrdom on behalf of the disenfranchised side of the Us and Them equation. He writes of the posthumous known, both real and fictional: Robert Tressell (unjustly unpublished in his lifetime because the publishers refused to read his manuscript in long hand); Thomas Hardy’s Jude (the Obscure) Fawley (‘In Memory of Jude’), rejected by Christminster University on account of his lowly social status;

and lesser known ‘obscuritans’ (this writer’s term for individuals unrecognised in their lifetimes) such as Mike Mosley, ‘Grey, calloused, forgotten at fifty’, and Kessel’s late friend Harold Mingham to whom he dedicated The Ivy, lauding him as ‘a great working-class poet’. Might we then say that Kessel’s poetry is Socialist: that of today’s true, forgotten working-classes scribbling fugitive lyrics in East End tenements? Well, we might. There’s certainly a strong sense of solidarity, artistic and social, surging through his poems. He quite clearly lays out his poetic manifesto in the polemic ‘Poetry and Poverty’ (originally published in Outsider Poems, 1999):

The poetry of the common people has been driven underground since 1660./ Poetry and otherness; the otherness of the common people./ When we cease to share, our language becomes a cipher, the language of the/ despatch box and the popular press./ Towards a new lyricism we need to rediscover a deciduous language, that of/ Winstanley and Emily Brontë./ There can be no cockney power without cockney poetry.

This Leveller-style manifesto – far more than mere agitprop – focuses typically on Kessel’s ‘Cockney’ motif, marrying historical and contemporary working-class political culture by implying the natural inheritors of working-class lyrical polemic were the pop songwriters of the punk era:

Cockney poetry is underground poetry/ expressed in Rock music; downbeat,/ dissonant, demotic; e.g. The Clash, The Jam, The Free.  

Certainly there’s some truth in this: how many poets – or even songwriters for that matter – of the last twenty years have written about urban hardship or social alienation? Well Kessel is one, but he’s certainly in a minority (bar Tony Harrison and Pete Morgan, I struggle to think of many others). Occasionally one might be reminded of, say, The Jam’s Paul Weller-penned lyrics such as ‘Down in the Tube Station at Midnight’, ‘That’s Entertainment’ and ‘Town Called Malice’ (1977-82)** when traversing Kessel’s urban inventories (both writers echoing Blake’s London-centricity), indicative of a definite punk flavour to his poetry; that bittersweet blend of social nihilism in the face of unaccountable consumer culture, mingled with a surprising leftwing optimism; Modism rather than Modernism. And like the punk-Mod ideologists of the late Seventies, Kessel thinks there is another way for us to live, and certainly not ‘the third way’. He still clings to the second: Socialism.

  It’s also in this polemical piece that inevitably emerges that other great 17th century proto-Socialist, Gerrard Winstanley, leader of the Diggers. There is indeed something of the social pamphleteer in Kessel, which is one way of summing him up: a militant poet polemicist. And in a similar spirit to the inimitable, mainstream-bashing tirades of Sixties Press poet and polemical pamphleteer Barry Tebb, the uncrowned laureate of Leeds (also at heart an urban-Romantic), Kessel (the pearly-crowned Cockney laureate) makes no bones about his contempt for the contemporary poetry ‘establishment’:

Established poets are idiots and liars,

also by definition great poets sleep in gutters

love is pure contingency

the eyes are everything.

(‘Schizoid’) 

The more fractured and oblique ‘Glass Is Dynamite’ however is the true polemical tour de force of Kessel’s poems. It is dedicated to Virginia Woolf, Joseph Conrad and, most fittingly, T.S. Eliot: the piece certainly echoes

aspects of the latter’s apocalyptic masterwork, The Wasteland. The poem seethes with frustrated yet efficacious creative force and offers the strikingly anarchic Rimbaudian rallying cry: ‘O the windows of the bookshop must be broken’ (the inevitable title for an inevitable collection). On one of my visits to Kessel’s Whitechapel digs I asked him what he meant by this extraordinary line, and he replied: “The only things that were alive in Hampstead were the books in a shop I went into. I thought, the windows of the bookshop must be broken, so the books can spill into the streets”.

  Poverty is an integral theme throughout Kessel’s poetry, nowadays perceived as ‘the poet in the garret cliché’ by a largely suburban mainstream. Yet we all know only too well how un-lucrative poetry is, especially today, so why the surprise that some poets, especially un-established ones, live in similar material hardships to the Chattertons and Davidsons (cue his anthemic ‘Thirty Bob a Week’) of yesteryear? And that given, why not write

about it? Anyone who has experienced poverty will strongly empathise with such themes, and anyone who has not might well learn much from

attempting to; and what better means than through the naked self-expression of poetry? Perhaps in Blair’s ‘progressive society’ we like to

pretend poverty doesn’t really exist, or just happens to other people, certainly not to reasonably well-educated verse-scribblers. But let’s not forget that not all ‘poets’ living today hail from Oxbridge or the conveyor-belts of the UEA: there are also the state-educated ‘naifs’ (to use one of Simon Jenner’s idioms), the Redbricks, blue-overalls and pinstripe poets (those who hold down ordinary jobs and write in their spare time) and occasional isolated autodidacts who slip through the net into some

measure of public consciousness. You could do a lot worse than Kessel for swatting up on the material hardships some inspired minds scrimp in:

A deadly man with loveless breath.

Time eating the stomach. Can’t afford fags.

(‘Disintegration’)

We live with uncertainty,

our giros and our dreams.

(‘New Cross’)  

  Kessel has often related to me his own take on Keats’s Negative Capability (“...when a man is capable of being in uncertainties ... without

any irritable reaching after fact and reason” – Keats, 1817): he describes his poetic ethos essentially as ‘anti-intellect’. I have taken this to mean Kessel believes in putting the heart, soul and guts back into poetry, and steering it away from the cerebral extremities of some Modernists; those Don Paterson for one has referred to as ‘obscurantists’. But perhaps

Kessel’s true target should be the ‘populists’ – as Paterson terms the mainstream poets –, many of whom arguably indulge too much in the plain and mundane, the apolitical ‘just-so-ness’ of society, the preoccupation with ‘things’ and ‘tangibles’ to the neglect of ‘ideas’, ‘abstracts’, ‘phantasms’ (i.e. the imagination); whose conscious attitudinal postures, or Poetical Correctness, might take heed – along with their polar opposite ‘obscurantists’ – of Keith Douglas’s humanistic dictum cited by Kessel as the source of his own poetic ethic: “‘Bullshit’ – it is an army word, and signifies humbug and unnecessary detail. It symbolises what I think must be got rid of – the mass of irrelevancies, of ‘attitudes’, ‘approaches’, propaganda, ivory towers etc., that stands between us and our problems and what we have to do about them” (from a letter to JC Hall, August 1943)***. This viewpoint is echoed in Kessel’s ‘Beautiful Ireland’: ‘If I could cut out my bullshit intellectualism/ as easily as I crap in heather/ there would be no more wars or leaders’. Kessel also says of his Douglas-inspired humanist emotionalism: “The invaluable purpose of poetry is to create hope in difficult circumstances****, which manifests in the significance of the British war poets. Standing where people, creatures, things hunger. Being essential, how few are the things that are really essential”.

  Modernists (and even ‘populists’) might scoff at Kessel’s somewhat ‘naif’, cathartic style, spitting out the term ‘confessional’, apparently a contemporary insult. But surely the urge to express oneself is in some sense

synonymous with the urge to confess? Or is it just the Catholic poets among us – practising or lapsed – who feel this urge to purge themselves through poetry? And do we take it that they are currently doing so in a climate of Protestant Poetics? A personal communion with the Muse not to be communicated publicly until transubstantiated into a palatable and rational draft; a trend for individualistic as opposed to socialistic subject; a preoccupation with private perceptions and issues as opposed to public and political ones? In that case, rage on the Recusant School.

  No poets would espouse wilful ‘obscurantism’ – a conscious closing-up to the general readership through a semantic esotericism that only the most erudite of eyes can decode – yet certain types of Modernist poetry can be (mis-)interpreted this way. Equally it is difficult to believe that any adherents to the more pellucid mainstream would champion dull diction and flat prosiness of form, yet many are undeniably guilty of this. Striking the right balance between metaphoric colour and emotional directness is the steepest hill for any poet to climb, but I think Kessel has come close to reaching this elusive summit, in spite of his work’s somewhat ragged, imperfectionist qualities. Kessel expresses his emotions nakedly and uncompromisingly in combination with metaphor and evocation, the nerve and fibre of poetry. He combines the visceral with the spiritual instinctively, producing work which is both innocent and experienced at the same time:

The church is harder than my desire

though much less real,

as hard as my patronising lust,

and so I masturbate in the wet grass.

(‘Beautiful Ireland’)

Kessel’s ‘anti-intellect’ stance might be doing his work a disservice in that such a self-label detracts from the demonstrative intellect pulsing through it. One is led to conclude this is a deliberately contentious claim on his part, a necessary exaggeration or over-emphasis to get an essential, humanistic point across to those who might brush off less absolute phraseology. Kessel’s intellectual gifts are as evident as his expressive ones, his poems littered with tantalising aphorisms and metaphors:

The rain is falling

on chipshop and battlefield.

(‘For Drummond Allison’)

A rasping melody of charlady morning challenges conscience.

(‘Songs of Soho’)

Eyes melting like song in the evening street.

(‘In North London’)

Listening to the soft rain on the leaves

I hear the decency and realism of friends’ humour...

I who am as dangerous as these cliffs

strive to be as kind as the meadow...

I fear this mountain I must climb more

than I fear fascism in a loved-one’s eyes. (‘Beautiful Ireland’)

Today a sweetheart’s sigh is more dangerous

than massed armies.

(‘Desperate Sex’)

A bored mouse storming heaven in a book,

the look took all my caring.

(‘The Ivy’)

Combined with this accomplished imagism is a gritty Romanticism, a sometimes breathtaking Shelleyan lyricism – often punctuated with the Kesselite sing-song, exclamatory O – all the more striking for its post-industrial backdrops:

 O to share a fag on wintry evenings

in a lonely street – all iron and sleet.

(‘To Bleed With Her’)

The piano scatters wide her mournful seed.

(‘In a Southern English Seaside Town’)

And I’ll follow the night-train to distant starved cities

to bleed and pain and sing

(‘Bus No 253’)

Hancock and Lennon have passed through here without being heard

to find peace in the burning innermost slums.

(‘The Barren Age,

For the Londoners of my Generation’)

Despair in a girl’s heart, where wild

chrysanthemums should be.

(‘Disintegration’)

Kessel’s striking descriptiveness is painterly, his poems often resembling figurative word-pictures, with an expressionistic quality echoing Lowry’s moth-toned cityscapes of industrial drudgery and Van Gogh’s tangible vividness:

Anger at love that disturbs the malicious street

leaping in the gutter with petrol and stubbed fags.

the rusty smell of the sea and misogynists’ guilt…

(‘A Mug of Black Coffee’)

A Cockney cleaner moves home eastwards

into the bright slums of humanity

 (‘In Finsbury Circus’);

A rasping melody of char-lady morning challenges the conscience.

...a drunk’s daydreams break across unfamiliar streets.

(‘Songs of Soho’)

These silent clouds between silent rows of Brockley terraces.

... To meet this earth in full flight

between its suicide and the market-place café.

(‘The Park’)

  There’s an unfashionably visionary element to Kessel’s poetry, harking back to Blake’s schizophrenic epiphanies (for example Songs of Innocence’s ‘The Ecchoing Green’; ‘Holy Thursday’ and Experience’s ‘The Chimney Sweeper’; ‘London’ – see Kessel’s ‘Elegy For Lost Innocence’, page 58) in its to-ing and fro-ing between polarities of social realism (charladies, bus workers, cockneys and so on) and bucolic utopianism; and William Morris’s aphorisms of romantic utilitarianism and the intrinsic beauty in the useful:

For there is within the soul of labour the tenderness

of the violet beneath the shaking lonely chestnut.

(‘For Emma, Aged 10’)

Tender words and arms by a spitting gas-fire.

Before the triumph of tyranny on the television

dreaming of news from nowhere

(‘England, O England’)

...the summer smell of lilac from a scrapyard.

(‘Willesden High Street’)

  Whatever one’s critical judgement of Kessel’s poetry, one can’t deny that it reeks of truth. In other words, Kessel is a sincere poet, he ‘feels what he feels’ as Arthur Clegg said, and not ‘because it might suit an audience’. Anyone who has had the privilege of listening to Kessel reading his work will have been struck by the impassioned, almost prophet-like manner in which he loudly howls out his poems, as if each word robs him of strength from the weight of its significance to him. The truth, as it is to him, is in his words. And like all truth, it is both painful and empowering. Despite the palpable sense of struggle and conflict in Kessel’s poetry, one does ultimately salvage from it a sense of optimism and empowerment, for this poet is still here, still writing, still battling the same lifetime’s demons, but those demons have failed to beat him into mute submission. Contrarily, they have driven him out into the world of others along the same steep-verged path trampled by the likes of Clare, Smart, Crane, Mew and Lafitte before him, through the liberating power of self-expression. His poetry climbs from its circumstances and pillages them for inspiration, producing something far more lasting and permanent, and beautiful.

Footnotes

* It was Keith Douglas’s generation who – exactly 300 years to the month after Lilburne was impeached by the Committee of Examinations for arguing for religious tolerance on 17th May 1645 – voted in the leftwing members of the Commonwealth Party (led by demobbed wing commanders), which in their four bi-election wins in May 1945 forced the resultant Attlee Labour Government into a far more radical leftwing programme of reform than it had previously contemplated under the likes of its manifesto drafter Herbert Morrison.

** Weller’s late poet friend Dave Waller inspired many of his early lyrics, essentially pop poems, in particular the fictional future civil war concept for The Jam’s 1979 LP Setting Sons; Weller also included a stanza from Shelley’s ‘The Mask of Anarchy’ on the rear sleeve of 1980’s Sound Affects album.

*** It’s interesting to contrast this with Keats’s comments on Haydon and Horace Smith in the same letter of 1817 which proffered his theory of Negative Capability: “These men say things which make one start, without making one feel; they are all alike; their manners are alike; they all know fashionables”.

**** similar to the definition of Modism: ‘striving to be respectable in difficult circumstances’; in the Mods’ case this manifests sartorially, in Kessel’s case, poetically.

Alan Morrison, March 2006


Self-reflection on my poem 'The Mansion Gardens'

commissioned by Stephanie Smith Browne for Strix Varia

http://www.strixvaria.com/Essays/FeaturedEssay.htm

Sussex by birth, I'd been brought up since the age of 10 in Cornwall, in a rather bleak hamlet called Trematon, just outside the town of Saltash which looked over the Tamar River towards Plymouth. A series of misfortunes over the years had resulted in my father being in and out of employment, through no fault of his own, and I had grown up in a semi-renovated, rackety old slate and stone cottage, in an atmosphere of powerless love and material hardship, with the misplaced ambition of becoming a writer and poet. As I always say, we had ‘the dreams but not the means'. Perhaps these intrinsic expectations had been seeded a generation or two before in the relative social prosperity and intellectual aspirations of particularly my father's mother's side of the family, the Fabian-inclined Asgills, with whom my father was genealogically consumed. Maturing to a young adult through an almost anachronistic rustic hardship, experienced in a hamlet (not idyllic in itself, but) gifted extraordinary views of natural beauty – a sort of picturesque poverty – and having, in wild contrast, spent my formative years in a relatively comfortable suburban upbringing in Sussex, my character was naturally shaped, or rather damp-warped, along an anomic path. The Cornish countryside, breathtakingly colourful in spring and summer, but dramatically and oppressively bleak in winter, had served to both inspire and depress me over the years. But my exposure to its green timelessness certainly influenced much of the imagery in my earliest poems. An integral theme in many of the poems of this initial flowering was that of the buckling cottage in which we lived, Trematon Cottage, which I first wrote about in an early poem called ‘The House on the Rise of Reversion'; two later poems about it, ‘Overgrown' and ‘Gorgon Stone', were among my first published poems in an anthology called Don't Think of Tigers (Do Not Stop Press, 2001). To this day I still return to it as a motif for impoverishment, its most recent manifestations, ‘The Cottage' and ‘The House of Sadness Past', appearing in my chapbook of 2004, Giving Light (Waterloo Press). But perhaps what the cottage symbolises in me is my inability to let to go of the past, an abstract never more tangible than when living in the countryside.

The theme of poverty then has always run through my work, most epitomised in a piece called ‘Tales from the Empty Larder', which I re-drafted after being inspired by reading the anthemic poverty-ode ‘Thirty Bob A Week' by John Davidson (1857-1909) (interestingly, Davidson's last years – prior to his suicide – were spent in severe hardship in Cornwall). This poem spoke volumes to me about the perennial theme of poverty; of how it is, like the countryside itself (but by no means as beneficially), timeless. In 2004 I published a book-length poem sequence called Clocking-in for the Witching Hour (Sixties Press), which was reviewed by Stephanie Smith-Browne at the time, and very generously I might add; this epic piece traversed in microscopic detail the life and trials of my father, then working as a badly-paid security officer, set as it was in the ‘Trematon period' of my life; it attempted to breach beyond mere empathy with my father to the point of imagining myself literally in his shoes, with his thoughts, beliefs, dreams, regrets. The piece focused much on tangibles and the symbolism in inanimate objects; a metaphorical evocation of poverty furnished with defunct family heirlooms ever preserved from being sold due to their sentimental significance (though most of these inherited relics were only minimally valuable). In particular I remember our chipped Chippendale table, fairly bereft of value due to its damage: it served for me as a poetically tragic piece of furniture considering our circumstances. Clocking-in also focused much on the more illustrious lives of some of our ancestors, by way of further contrast; in particular, the curious incidental story of one ancestor's disinheritance from a Baronetcy; and the remarkably bizarre ideas of another, John Asgill, who believed Christians did not have to die, but could by legal right claim bodily ‘translation' to Heaven before their natural ends; John was posthumously nicknamed ‘Translated' Asgill. What a character. This work was basically concerned with inheritance, disinheritance and spiritual transcendence over mortal trials. It was an ambitious work but one I will go back to sometime and refine for future re-publication. A more recent work on the themes of social, material and artistic obscurity, poverty, the aspirations of Socialism, the punishments of Capitalism, is another long narrative piece called Keir Hardie Street , penned by an early twentieth century alter-ego of mine called Allan Jackdaw, a personified motif of the struggling, socialistic writer/poet, partly inspired by the likes of Robert Tressell (author of The Ragged Trousered Philanthropists ) and John Davidson (whose ‘Thirty Bob A Week' greatly influenced much of the ‘lyric and grit' of the opening stanzas). In this piece the protagonist imagines he discovers an alternative London along a fictitious Sea-Green Line of the Underground, where he watches the life of Keir Hardie, his rise from baker's delivery boy, through auto-didactic coal miner to Labour's first Parliamentary leader.

But the poem of mine which best captures the almost Lewis Carol-tinged ‘picturesque poverty' of which I alluded to earlier (cue the Mad Hatter's timeless, somewhat austerely cake-less tea-party, the character being arguably based on the 17 th century social idealist Roger Crabb, who gave all his possessions to the poor and thus ended up destitute*), is the poem included above, ‘The Mansion Gardens', which I first drafted back in 1994, when I was roughly twenty years old. It's a piece which I feel now more pithily and lyrically distils much of the themes I have pored over more lengthily in later works. It started life in a fairly conventional verse structure but some years on, I returned to it and chiselled it down to the bare bones now on display. Pruning off all unnecessary verbiage I ended up with a scanter but more emphatic piece. Its conversational style, whether actual spoken dialogue or a sort of telepathy between the two protagonists, was partly shaped from my reading of Harold Monro's The Silent Pool (circa 1930s, Faber ); there's a particular poem, ‘Bitter Sanctuary', which uses scripted prompts such as He: and She: to convey some sort of thought-dialogue between a couple, and I also used this later more blatantly in a piece called ‘Infatuation: The First' ( Giving Light , 2004). My protagonists are based on my parents, both of whom used to enjoy weekend visits to stately homes, afforded them from free National Trust coupons off the back of tea-bag boxes: ‘Come on, love, we've cut the coupons,/ let's see those shouting flowers/ round grounds of ivy towers.' I usually accompanied my parents on these day-trips, which is where the idea for ‘The Mansion Gardens' stemmed from. My poem rather impertinently guesses at their thoughts – though ones no doubt my father in particular would empathise with – as they walk humbly around the ‘baize on baize' of gardens, one more prone to resentment and social-indignation at the unobtainable grandeur of the setting than the more humble other. The slant of the questioner's thought processes, or words, are more tinged with rebelliousness than his partner's, but not on a conscious level: ‘ I'm not envious: simply a dreamer: /those lawns seemed so much greener… '

[* though the most popular assumed source of the Mad Hatter is the generic mercury-poisoning of hat-makers of the past]

The ‘mansion gardens' themselves were meant consciously to act as a metaphor for the state in which most of us live: scrimping out our lives in the struggle to make ends meet in life's seasonal ‘gardens', while under the grand glare of the ‘mansion', that perpetual and inaccessible impunity of the comfortable and prosperous state which forever eludes our grasp; ‘the ivy towers' as a pun on ‘ivory towers' of course. You might read into this a metaphor for imperfect existence and aspired-to heavenly/Utopian perfection, but what I intended consciously was a more Marxian Us and Them metaphor; nothing more complex than that (but then what does my opinion matter? Once a piece of writing is created, it exists completely separately from its creator, and is whatever a reader projects into it). The sense of inaccessibility to what one finds pleasing to the eye and potentially to the mind and spirit is further emphasized by the ubiquity of ‘blue ropes' (‘pasty-plaited' to evoke the crust of a Cornish pasty) cordoning off the couple from the mansion's beautiful rooms; the look-but-don't-touch gloating of the class divide; the unprivileged person's almost masochistic infatuation with the arguably undeserved wealth and celebrity of those partitioned-off – in all their material gratuity – from their own struggling lives. One thinks of blue-rinse grannies lining their council flat mantelpieces with mugs adorned with the faces of the Royal Family. I don't think that my poem tries to justify any type of envy, only righteous indignation at the glaring unfairness of the class divide.

But in truth I think my poem is more garbled than this. I am more inclined to think that on writing it I had in mind, perhaps unconsciously, not a couple conversing (whether verbally or telepathically), but a sort of inner-dialogue, a mock-conversation which is actually the almost schizophrenic interchange of two contradictory chains of thought and perception in one person's head. I think this is the real shape of the poem; what its style, hopefully, implies. And just as two people in a relationship are bound in contradictions, so too are the thoughts and opinions in one person's mind; after all, what are relationships really but the perennial inter-projections of each others' consciousnesses and identities. On another level of the gardens then, we see perhaps a couple ultimately morph into one at the resolution of the poem, into one opinion possibly, after the exchange of differing viewpoints which forms the main body of the piece. The visit of the impoverished couple (or person) to the rich permanence of a mansion and its gardens, in order to briefly escape the drudgery of (his/her or) their lives – that is arguably perpetuated by the hoarded monopolies of others who are unwilling to share their prosperity – in turn perhaps proffers another contradiction to fit the overall theme. Again, I hope so. But I never have been a great interpreter of my own work.

Alan Morrison 

No Macro Lover

Nicholas Lafitte

Near Calvary – Selected Poems 1959 – 1970, The Many Press ISBN 0 907326 20 X Reviewed by Alan Morrison, Poetry Express 19

Nicholas Lafitte committed suicide at 27 after a long battle with schizophrenia. Arguably this highly gifted poet threw away, along with his life, a greater literary legacy. It’s probably best however to refrain from such speculations and resist the temptation to billet Lafitte with the likes of Douglas, Keyes et al. Anyhow, he did live and write for at least three years longer.

  Lafitte is more of an obsessional than confessional poet. More Plath than Lowell, with the odd lyrical smatter of Lorca. His poetry swings between polarities of stark intellectualism and morbid religiosity reminiscent of the ‘mania’ of Smart (the title ‘The Madman Compares God To A Great Light’ says it all). It would be shallow to put this down to schizophrenia; there’s evidence of deep ontological concerns which are perfectly rational, if a little obsessive.

  Lafitte’s style can be stream-of-consciousness: ‘It is the leopard-coloured sand/You see, supine beneath these, ultimate/Fins of the sea-scales I lie/On the sea’s edge, a heavy sand to be squeezed/As who would squeeze a flannel with my one/Eye against the sun I see the sheer/Rock face soars up unperspective-/Wise to where trees shatter the sky’ (‘This, Is The Sea’).

  It can be casual and direct like the Roman love poets: ‘Love is not loving or being good or kind,/is rather a sort of shared disturbance/in the emptiness, ripple in a pool of /bleakness. To say I love you as you once said/to me does not demand a gesture like, say,/a valentine or kiss. Love is’.

  It can be supremely descriptive: ‘the damson twilight, half creamed clouds/Of smoke hung like laundered sheets from the beamed/Roof tree’ (‘Evening Over Malta’); ‘the trees scorched ochre, chrome yellow’ (‘And the blue grass taut and dry’). It can be succinct and evocative: ‘men,/with freckled hands sip beer in silence’ (‘To A Sicillian Prostitute’).

  Typically of many mentally afflicted poets, Lafitte invests a neurotic animism in the anxiety-free natural world: ‘The old wasp/Sun stings the window pane’ (‘To A Sicillian Prostitute’); ‘the January sun/Must always dwarf the summer, see/How it stretches skies across the city’s black!’ (‘Poem For Robert’); where the evening is a yellow glass,/And battered crows comment scornfully’ (‘Seven Last Words’); ‘The pathology of autumn synchronises/ Breakdowns with the falling of the leaves./A neurotic sun travels round the sky’s rim’ (‘In The Clinic’); ‘Climate is mortality’ (‘Calvin’s God’).

  Some phrases of Lafitte’s read like sections of Van Gogh’s paintings: ‘knives of rain’; or Max Beckmann’s: ‘oiled existence skins’.

  ‘In The Clinic’ is the accessible mental illness piece which had to be written, but still surprises metaphorically: ‘November is/The staff nurse with the clinical smile’. It includes the motif of the head as a helmet which crops up sporadically throughout the collection: ‘Schizophrenia’s/Worse, that’s when you wear a balaclava/Helmet in the summer’.

  Lafitte’s introspection is limitless: ‘I am no macro-lover,/nor even very nice’ (‘If There’s God Above The Blood-Bathed Heavens’). It verges on the solipsistic: ‘I AM MY WORLD’ (‘Homage To Wallace Stevens’).

  Lafitte is gripped in a morbid theology, a faithless faith blighted by a questioning intellect: ‘There is no final metaphor. Only this,/Inevitable, fidget with the images. Canterbury carried by anthropomorphic/Frenzy demands male ministers’. At the end of this piece Lafitte, as if exhausted with trying to sum up the ‘sensed otherness’ of spirituality, sighs a final metaphor: ‘men fumbling with matches in the night’ (‘Thoughts At Night’).

  Some parts of this collection read like a philosophical self-help pamphlet getting in a bit of a tangle. Lafitte is a soldier of doubt who comes through the smoke of the battlefield in spite of himself, in spite of his final act. His mastery of poetic styles is breathtaking as is his descriptive inventiveness. He is only let down by occasional over-theologizing.

  So is Lafitte’s philosophical epitaph to be: ‘My god has gone; we are all/alone now, each in our desperate bed’ (‘Letter from Mwanza’)? Powerfully typical of this poet’s gifted pessimism, but I prefer: ‘Yet shall/My love endure the summer of my strength’ (‘Seven Last Words’).


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